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According to our journey the major activity (is) go to watch cherry flowers, one of my friend her schedule not match, so when we arrival there on April 17, the cherry flowers almost to fall off the trees. However recently weather very good, we may saw the sun everyday in LA, a lots of flowers are blooming in the spring and I can see green plants anywhere around me , I felt the temperature very good and felt quite comfortable.
Day1
First day we late to out, around 3pm leave the hotels and we get off the coach eat dinner, and then we arrival the hotel of Washington at 9pm, everything seem are smoothly and our moods are pretty good, unfortunately on the way to Washington Karina got carsick, she vomit in the coach and made the seats are dirty, even her cloths also have these dirty stuff. She vomit in the car three or four times, each time made me dirty and made me down , but I only bring 3 of my pants on the trip, so I need asked my sister borrow me her pants , I think next time go to trip I must prepare more pants, especially plastic bags.
Day 2
That day we go to Arlington National Cemetery, a lot of traveler at that place and saw many coach bring the pupils visit there, actually I don’t want to visit there because that place is Soldier’s cemetery, but the Cemetery very beautiful, such as a park. And then afternoon to go downtown visit the zoon I saw a panda at that soon.
Since car park charge very expensive so we give up to go visit another Zooms, then the next point is go to visit White House, we drive around there a circle, we can see white house very beautiful, at that moment we want to meet the U.S President Obama and one of my friend said that want to visit Obama’s house Lol, of course she very disappointed, because Obama not always at white house. We go thought that day’s schedule then go to hotel and swimming at the hotel, two of my friend play at the very happy and I was felt happy too. At night time we ate our dinner at Tyson that place near the resident, we are very enjoy the dinner time , we all near full one of my friend told me that she felt tire and want to sleep , so we eat the dinner very fast.
Day3
We get up at 10am, ate our breakfast at McDonald fast food shop, then we start go to central square, there have The president Lincolns and Washington president’s Memorial, and the war of Vietnam memorial, then we arrival the river side almost all the cherry flowers fall off, we following the rival side go to car park on the way we saw the grass every beautiful, the tress are dancing with the wind, the sunshine shying on the water, then the water like a mirror reflected with sparkles. On the way to the next viewpoint my friend sleep on the car, when the coach arrival the destination I shake her up go to walk street and see there, we spent this afternoon in that place. We eat dinner at the mall same as last night.
Day 4
We fished our breakfast then go to swimming pool, till to the noon we leave Washington the go to Philadelphia meet my ant and visit my friend and meet her family, we eat lunch in the china town, they told me that Philadelphia this area house price lower that New York, but felt very boring at here and I like live in crowed city like New York, but on the way back to home we meet traffic jam. Arrival home already at 10pm.
Conclusion: We all satisfield this trip in USA.
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